I saw a post a while back about a place to post erotic stories in the forum,
I never did see anything else posted, so im feeling brave this morning.....lol im going to post a story im working on if it works out and every one likes ill post more as I write them, if it bombs or the group owners tell me no more then ill apologize in advance...lol
I hope everyone enjoys,
its a light bondage story, called the switch, and its based on a real life occurrences
all comments are welcome
Rog
I never did see anything else posted, so im feeling brave this morning.....lol im going to post a story im working on if it works out and every one likes ill post more as I write them, if it bombs or the group owners tell me no more then ill apologize in advance...lol
I hope everyone enjoys,
its a light bondage story, called the switch, and its based on a real life occurrences
all comments are welcome
Rog
THE SWITCH
I arrive home in a foul mood its been a hellish night at work im worn out when you meet me at the door, dressed in a night robe a warm smile and a passionate kiss. I growl im in no mood tonight all I want to do is go to sleep, you start to help me undress pulling my shirt out of my pants where it is tucked in I grumble im a big boy I can undress my self you smile at me step back then start to unsnap the keepers on my gun belt, and undo the Velcro straps on my vest I growl at you and you giggle and shush me with a kiss telling me you will start me a shower saying "your not getting into my bed until you have had one"grumbling under my breath I start toward our bedroom and the waiting shower admitting to my self that I will probably feel better after one, had I been in a better mood I might have noticed the mischievous gleam in your eyes and wondered about it, I step into the shower and stand under the steaming water letting the heat soak into my tired muscles and letting the water take a calming and relaxing effect on me as I am standing in the shower I hear you moving about the bedroom, as I get out and towel dry I step toward the sink to brush my teeth I hear you ask" feeling better" ? I mumble and finish brushing my teeth and you giggle saying I have a surprise for you, I grumble again thinking im not in the damn mood for surprises as I step into the bedroom, I see you standing there in a leather teddy, which is tight showing off the curves and swell of your body. I stop and stare dumbfounded you look so tasty, the corset cinching your waist tight and pressing your full breasts to a jutting angle the rich fullness of them swaying with every sensual movement of your body, your nipples large and round like silver dollars stare back at me invitingly as the nubs began to stand erect begging to be suckled and bitten. knee high , high stiletto heeled boots with a heel so high it defies the imagination of how you stand with balance mesh and lace gloves cover your small delicate hands and a lacy mask covers your eyes making the green in them pronounced you have a wicked grin and ask me if I like? I nod dumbly and you crook your finger and motion for me to come to you, I stand still dumbfounded as you narrow your eyes and snap come here! slowly I move toward you drinking in your beauty you place a gloved hand to my chest and slowly run it over my chest the soft whisper of lace causing goose pimples to rise across my flesh my nipples harden and began to sting im becoming so aroused I lean in and catch a whisper of babysoft perfume on your hair as your lips hungrily find mine you force your tongue between my parted lips and teeth and tease and coax my tongue to life as it begins to dance around yours you run your gloved hand down my chest and find my nipple circle it slowly with your finger and pinch it surprising me I start to pull back and you bite my lower lip holding me still your hand glides lower and find my erect and still growing cock gently you grasp it in your hand and slowly work the foreskin over the head and back down stretching it taught and working the skin back forward again still biting my lip and slowly but gently jacking me off im in total shock ive never seen this side of you! you run your hand back down the shaft of my now fully erect cock and cup my balls and began to squeeze gently at first then harder whispering in my ear " now my little slut slave you will do exactly as I tell you and you will please your mistress exactly as she wishes to be pleased" I simply stare and you squeeze my balls harder and rise me to my toes saying do you understand? you narrow your eyes and give a quick squeeze and I yelp yes mistress! you smile and say that's better your a fast learner, now kneel before your mistress. I kneel down just as I have had you kneel many times before me , wondering what you are up to, quickly you take my handcuffs and secure my wrists to my ankles and apply a blindfold to my eyes, I can not see and im trussed like a turkey for baking, I feel you rather then hear you moving around me, gloved fingers lightly touching my back and neck
Now my little slut what shall I do with you?you ask perhaps my vibrator in your ass??? Hell NO! I snap and I feel a sharp stinging slap to my exposed ass and it stings im suddenly reminded of paddling's in school and realize you have taken a riding crop to me, silence! you snap you will speak only when given permission and you will do exactly as I tell you to! I feel the crop glide across my exposed back and I hear you moan softly wondering what your doing , I feel the softness of your gloved fingers run around my face and catch a hint of your scent on them , "do you like the smell of my pussy slave"? you purr softly would you like to eat my pussy?would you like to taste my juices I have just for you?would you my little slave?I nod and you run your finger around my lips and gently insert it into my mouth I greedily suck at your finger tasting you and begging for more I hear you unsnap the the snaps of the crotch of your corset and feel the heat of your exposed region as you jut your hips forward to the tip of my nose as I flick my tongue out you move back and tell me to beg for it, I began to beg telling you I want to eat you I want to taste your honey like juices I want to bring you pleasure , I want you to give your pussy to my tongue, you slowly push your self back to my face and rotate your hips , your pubic hair tickling my nose as I lap greedily at your wet dripping pussy, I run my tongue around your lips and slowly part the folds with my tongue. as my tongue slides inside you you moan and pull my head closer into you I nip gently at your clit and suck it running my tongue all around it working my tongue back down and sliding it inside you again to taste your juices, I savor the taste as I work it back in and out of you increasing the flicking motions with the rhythm of your moans as you rock your hips back and forth against my face you stop and push me back you undo my hands from my ankles and re secure them behind my back you push me back and slowly squat and lower your self onto my erect cock reaching down you grasp it in your gloved hand stroking it and gently squeezing as you stroke the skin back and forth then you take the head and start to rub it around your dripping wet pussy, sliding back and forth as I feel the wetness soak the head of my cock you move it back and forth rubbing over your slit, down to your ass and back up to your Clit I feel like I will explode just from the rubbing I feel you squat deeper and I feel the head of my cock part the folds of your lips a hiss escapes my lips as I glide inside you the feeling is so extreme I feel like I will explode and fill your carven with cum you reach down and squeeze my balls telling me not yet you have not given permission, suddenly with out warning you squat all the way ramming my cock deep in your pussy and you rise off me again taking your fingers you began to massage your clit as you ride me slowly mind numbing at first then increasing your squats as your breathing and moans increase you fuck me harder and faster, I start to buck my hips deeper inside you trying to match your pace you cry out and release all over my cock soaking me and thrusting down hard to take all of me inside you, you collapse against my chest panting and still moving your hips slowly fucking me I thrust harder up inside you wanting to cum to fill you with my juice you start to grind harder and ride me again as I moan im starting to feel the eruption build deep inside me and you pull off me grasping me in your gloved hand you continue to stroke my rock hard cock so not to lose the feeling of ejaculation and you lower your mouth to my cock flicking your tongue across the head and taking it into your mouth you slowly start to suck running your tongue up and down the shaft of my cock and you work up and down hands tongue and teeth working in unison tasting us together you pull upwards and run your tongue across the tip of my cock as pre cum escapes you pull back a little and I see a string of cum from my cock to your tongue then you take me to the base in one gulp and causing my eyes to roll back in my head this feels so good you suck faster and harder biting the base of my cock and raking your teeth across the skin I moan loudly and explode deep into the back of your throat greedily you swallow every drop and suck harder milking all I have left with your gloved hand you look at me and smile kissing me deep and passionately and falling against my chest contented we lay together two hearts beating in time knowing that this is just the beginning of a new aspect of play I cant wait ill my next bad day
I arrive home in a foul mood its been a hellish night at work im worn out when you meet me at the door, dressed in a night robe a warm smile and a passionate kiss. I growl im in no mood tonight all I want to do is go to sleep, you start to help me undress pulling my shirt out of my pants where it is tucked in I grumble im a big boy I can undress my self you smile at me step back then start to unsnap the keepers on my gun belt, and undo the Velcro straps on my vest I growl at you and you giggle and shush me with a kiss telling me you will start me a shower saying "your not getting into my bed until you have had one"grumbling under my breath I start toward our bedroom and the waiting shower admitting to my self that I will probably feel better after one, had I been in a better mood I might have noticed the mischievous gleam in your eyes and wondered about it, I step into the shower and stand under the steaming water letting the heat soak into my tired muscles and letting the water take a calming and relaxing effect on me as I am standing in the shower I hear you moving about the bedroom, as I get out and towel dry I step toward the sink to brush my teeth I hear you ask" feeling better" ? I mumble and finish brushing my teeth and you giggle saying I have a surprise for you, I grumble again thinking im not in the damn mood for surprises as I step into the bedroom, I see you standing there in a leather teddy, which is tight showing off the curves and swell of your body. I stop and stare dumbfounded you look so tasty, the corset cinching your waist tight and pressing your full breasts to a jutting angle the rich fullness of them swaying with every sensual movement of your body, your nipples large and round like silver dollars stare back at me invitingly as the nubs began to stand erect begging to be suckled and bitten. knee high , high stiletto heeled boots with a heel so high it defies the imagination of how you stand with balance mesh and lace gloves cover your small delicate hands and a lacy mask covers your eyes making the green in them pronounced you have a wicked grin and ask me if I like? I nod dumbly and you crook your finger and motion for me to come to you, I stand still dumbfounded as you narrow your eyes and snap come here! slowly I move toward you drinking in your beauty you place a gloved hand to my chest and slowly run it over my chest the soft whisper of lace causing goose pimples to rise across my flesh my nipples harden and began to sting im becoming so aroused I lean in and catch a whisper of babysoft perfume on your hair as your lips hungrily find mine you force your tongue between my parted lips and teeth and tease and coax my tongue to life as it begins to dance around yours you run your gloved hand down my chest and find my nipple circle it slowly with your finger and pinch it surprising me I start to pull back and you bite my lower lip holding me still your hand glides lower and find my erect and still growing cock gently you grasp it in your hand and slowly work the foreskin over the head and back down stretching it taught and working the skin back forward again still biting my lip and slowly but gently jacking me off im in total shock ive never seen this side of you! you run your hand back down the shaft of my now fully erect cock and cup my balls and began to squeeze gently at first then harder whispering in my ear " now my little slut slave you will do exactly as I tell you and you will please your mistress exactly as she wishes to be pleased" I simply stare and you squeeze my balls harder and rise me to my toes saying do you understand? you narrow your eyes and give a quick squeeze and I yelp yes mistress! you smile and say that's better your a fast learner, now kneel before your mistress. I kneel down just as I have had you kneel many times before me , wondering what you are up to, quickly you take my handcuffs and secure my wrists to my ankles and apply a blindfold to my eyes, I can not see and im trussed like a turkey for baking, I feel you rather then hear you moving around me, gloved fingers lightly touching my back and neck
Now my little slut what shall I do with you?you ask perhaps my vibrator in your ass??? Hell NO! I snap and I feel a sharp stinging slap to my exposed ass and it stings im suddenly reminded of paddling's in school and realize you have taken a riding crop to me, silence! you snap you will speak only when given permission and you will do exactly as I tell you to! I feel the crop glide across my exposed back and I hear you moan softly wondering what your doing , I feel the softness of your gloved fingers run around my face and catch a hint of your scent on them , "do you like the smell of my pussy slave"? you purr softly would you like to eat my pussy?would you like to taste my juices I have just for you?would you my little slave?I nod and you run your finger around my lips and gently insert it into my mouth I greedily suck at your finger tasting you and begging for more I hear you unsnap the the snaps of the crotch of your corset and feel the heat of your exposed region as you jut your hips forward to the tip of my nose as I flick my tongue out you move back and tell me to beg for it, I began to beg telling you I want to eat you I want to taste your honey like juices I want to bring you pleasure , I want you to give your pussy to my tongue, you slowly push your self back to my face and rotate your hips , your pubic hair tickling my nose as I lap greedily at your wet dripping pussy, I run my tongue around your lips and slowly part the folds with my tongue. as my tongue slides inside you you moan and pull my head closer into you I nip gently at your clit and suck it running my tongue all around it working my tongue back down and sliding it inside you again to taste your juices, I savor the taste as I work it back in and out of you increasing the flicking motions with the rhythm of your moans as you rock your hips back and forth against my face you stop and push me back you undo my hands from my ankles and re secure them behind my back you push me back and slowly squat and lower your self onto my erect cock reaching down you grasp it in your gloved hand stroking it and gently squeezing as you stroke the skin back and forth then you take the head and start to rub it around your dripping wet pussy, sliding back and forth as I feel the wetness soak the head of my cock you move it back and forth rubbing over your slit, down to your ass and back up to your Clit I feel like I will explode just from the rubbing I feel you squat deeper and I feel the head of my cock part the folds of your lips a hiss escapes my lips as I glide inside you the feeling is so extreme I feel like I will explode and fill your carven with cum you reach down and squeeze my balls telling me not yet you have not given permission, suddenly with out warning you squat all the way ramming my cock deep in your pussy and you rise off me again taking your fingers you began to massage your clit as you ride me slowly mind numbing at first then increasing your squats as your breathing and moans increase you fuck me harder and faster, I start to buck my hips deeper inside you trying to match your pace you cry out and release all over my cock soaking me and thrusting down hard to take all of me inside you, you collapse against my chest panting and still moving your hips slowly fucking me I thrust harder up inside you wanting to cum to fill you with my juice you start to grind harder and ride me again as I moan im starting to feel the eruption build deep inside me and you pull off me grasping me in your gloved hand you continue to stroke my rock hard cock so not to lose the feeling of ejaculation and you lower your mouth to my cock flicking your tongue across the head and taking it into your mouth you slowly start to suck running your tongue up and down the shaft of my cock and you work up and down hands tongue and teeth working in unison tasting us together you pull upwards and run your tongue across the tip of my cock as pre cum escapes you pull back a little and I see a string of cum from my cock to your tongue then you take me to the base in one gulp and causing my eyes to roll back in my head this feels so good you suck faster and harder biting the base of my cock and raking your teeth across the skin I moan loudly and explode deep into the back of your throat greedily you swallow every drop and suck harder milking all I have left with your gloved hand you look at me and smile kissing me deep and passionately and falling against my chest contented we lay together two hearts beating in time knowing that this is just the beginning of a new aspect of play I cant wait ill my next bad day
As an erotic writer, I just have one constructive comment:
In order for me to be able to read past the first few sentences, I need some paragraph breaks.
~Ang
In order for me to be able to read past the first few sentences, I need some paragraph breaks.
~Ang
You might want to try writing the second person as well... Instead of saying " She rode my cock" try saying "She rode his cock"... or instead of "I licked up all of her pussy's sweet juices" try "He (or she) licked up all of her pussy's sweet juices"... Just a thought.... Whew... Just writing about it makes me horny... LOL
I wrote this and emailed it to Pam at work...she pounced on me later that night...and my friends think I am weird for reading romance novels...without them, I wouldn't have all this good vocabulary.
It was a beautiful day at the lake
It was a beautiful day at the lake
Hi there I (Male) also enjoy writting, I wouldn't really call this on an eroctic novel but most I send it too seem to like it. Hope you all do too! I'd love to hear comments, except for the spelling, that I already know I can't do.
It is right about 6:30 pm, you are sitting on your favorite overstuffed chair, leaned back, eyes slightly closed. From the look on your face it is very obvious that your day wasn
It is right about 6:30 pm, you are sitting on your favorite overstuffed chair, leaned back, eyes slightly closed. From the look on your face it is very obvious that your day wasn